Wheeeeeee!!! Smoochies! I was giggling along with Sam as she alluded ot her 'special' somethign for the Colonel *G* Jackie sounds like he got his but kicked in the last epi, loved his 'it better not be paperwork' line too was hilarious! *G* Very in depth little fic, lotsa details I liked that :)
Josephides brings up an interesting point, maybe what you're reading has been influencing your style of writing. Lately every original thing I work on is from present tense 2nd person POV when usually I write in past tense 3rd person but there's really no reason for my style to change tho, so who knows maybe it's just the voices in ur head are speaking that way now :)
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Date: 2003-06-19 02:18 am (UTC)Josephides brings up an interesting point, maybe what you're reading has been influencing your style of writing. Lately every original thing I work on is from present tense 2nd person POV when usually I write in past tense 3rd person but there's really no reason for my style to change tho, so who knows maybe it's just the voices in ur head are speaking that way now :)