I don't know - it's pretty perfect on its own, though you might want to do Sam's POV to show *why* she'd suddenly decide to do that. Hmm. It's up to you, of course.
Yeah, I kind of want to do that, but I also have five zillion other things to work on, and this doens't need a companion...
Might be a fandom thing - most S/J Stargate fic is written in the.... 'third person limited omniscient POV'. Very few write in any other POV.
(Is there another term for that POV? That was the only one I could find that describes it accurately.) Yeah, I have noticed a lot of that POV in this fandom, even in the long fics. Other fandoms seem to gravitate more towards third person omniscient. Interesting. I think you're probably right...
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Date: 2003-06-19 05:06 pm (UTC)Thanks!
I don't know - it's pretty perfect on its own, though you might want to do Sam's POV to show *why* she'd suddenly decide to do that. Hmm. It's up to you, of course.
Yeah, I kind of want to do that, but I also have five zillion other things to work on, and this doens't need a companion...
Might be a fandom thing - most S/J Stargate fic is written in the.... 'third person limited omniscient POV'. Very few write in any other POV.
(Is there another term for that POV? That was the only one I could find that describes it accurately.) Yeah, I have noticed a lot of that POV in this fandom, even in the long fics. Other fandoms seem to gravitate more towards third person omniscient. Interesting. I think you're probably right...