Ooooh okay this is very kewl fic Becca, a little obscure in that if I didn't know it was supposed to be Jack with her I'd think she settled for somebody else (like Daniel! *EG*)
I love the entire opening paragraph
'Guilt, sorrow...regret isn't there adding its potency to the mixture, not really, because you took this with both hands and eyes wide open. ' this line ohhhh the angst but still a little bit hopeful and so I reeeally like it.
"I know, Sam. Me, too." *whimper* So kewl :) I likes! Muchas!! Dunno why u don't, it's good stuff :)
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Date: 2003-05-29 08:54 pm (UTC)I love the entire opening paragraph
'Guilt, sorrow...regret isn't there adding its potency to the mixture, not really, because you took this with both hands and eyes wide open. ' this line ohhhh the angst but still a little bit hopeful and so I reeeally like it.
"I know, Sam. Me, too." *whimper* So kewl :)
I likes! Muchas!! Dunno why u don't, it's good stuff :)