Ooooh okay this is very kewl fic Becca, a little obscure in that if I didn't know it was supposed to be Jack with her I'd think she settled for somebody else (like Daniel! *EG*)
*snort* Until you remember who wrote it... ;) I didn't realize that there was that mystery there (at least until the cabin/fishing line), but now that you've pointed it out, I quite like it.
I love the entire opening paragraph
Thanks. That's seriously the most PG-13-ish paragraph I've ever written, I think. My god, really am a prude, aren't I?
'Guilt, sorrow...regret isn't there adding its potency to the mixture, not really, because you took this with both hands and eyes wide open. ' this line ohhhh the angst but still a little bit hopeful and so I reeeally like it.
I'm all about hopeful angst. Hehehe.
"I know, Sam. Me, too." *whimper* So kewl :)
:)
I likes! Muchas!! Dunno why u don't, it's good stuff :)
Thanks, Jodie! I guess I don't not like it...I just feel a little weird about it. I think it's 'cause I'd never written anything that short before. ;)
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Date: 2003-05-30 08:38 am (UTC)*snort* Until you remember who wrote it... ;) I didn't realize that there was that mystery there (at least until the cabin/fishing line), but now that you've pointed it out, I quite like it.
I love the entire opening paragraph
Thanks. That's seriously the most PG-13-ish paragraph I've ever written, I think. My god, really am a prude, aren't I?
'Guilt, sorrow...regret isn't there adding its potency to the mixture, not really, because you took this with both hands and eyes wide open. ' this line ohhhh the angst but still a little bit hopeful and so I reeeally like it.
I'm all about hopeful angst. Hehehe.
"I know, Sam. Me, too." *whimper* So kewl :)
:)
I likes! Muchas!! Dunno why u don't, it's good stuff :)
Thanks, Jodie! I guess I don't not like it...I just feel a little weird about it. I think it's 'cause I'd never written anything that short before. ;)