Eee! Hoh my gosh, I've never read a DS fic before! And I saw the little similarity to the Northen Exposure episode :D I thought you used it really well - you made it your own! So, I'm no expert on writing or anything, but I can honestly say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I thought you characterised Meg really well, and I liked all the references to the past episodes. It made it seem like a continuation of the series; really natural. And Fraser was so cute! He was completely still for a moment. Then he nodded once. "If you'll call me Ben," he replied. That is SO Fraser :3 His face, when he looked up at her, was completely honest. "I very much hoped you would," he said. Eee! Love it! :D I liked the ending too; that sneaky Frobisher, he knew they'd get together! Anyhoo, well done for finishing it at last! It looks like it was worth it :) Just out of curiosity - will you write more? I do love Fraser/Thatcher :3 ♥
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Date: 2007-06-28 04:08 pm (UTC)So, I'm no expert on writing or anything, but I can honestly say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I thought you characterised Meg really well, and I liked all the references to the past episodes. It made it seem like a continuation of the series; really natural. And Fraser was so cute!
He was completely still for a moment. Then he nodded once. "If you'll call me Ben," he replied.
That is SO Fraser :3
His face, when he looked up at her, was completely honest. "I very much hoped you would," he said.
Eee! Love it! :D
I liked the ending too; that sneaky Frobisher, he knew they'd get together!
Anyhoo, well done for finishing it at last! It looks like it was worth it :)
Just out of curiosity - will you write more? I do love Fraser/Thatcher :3
♥