Found this after reading your Ivanova/Marcus, so I guess I'm reading backwards?
I think dark-fic works well in this universe, and you've certainly captured some of the tone of that season; there's something about the way you tell some of the conversations rather than writing them out that gives it the right atmosphere.
Mostly, though, I really like how you've written Ivanova, who's so determined not to get hurt but ends up getting hurt anyway. The ending is really effective in its simplicity.
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Date: 2009-06-22 02:53 am (UTC)I think dark-fic works well in this universe, and you've certainly captured some of the tone of that season; there's something about the way you tell some of the conversations rather than writing them out that gives it the right atmosphere.
Mostly, though, I really like how you've written Ivanova, who's so determined not to get hurt but ends up getting hurt anyway. The ending is really effective in its simplicity.