Nothing like a new fic to cheer up a boring and ill (I got a cold) sunday.
You know what I enjoy most of your fics? The dialogues. They seem so natural and fluid, so in canon that they actually could have been part of the movie, in fact, this could have been a perfect ending for 'Shall We Dance?' The movie ending is too abrupt.
Peter pointed to the side. "Look! It's Penny Carroll and Lucky Garnett!"
That made me laugh, haha.
Aw, and the dance under the rain was adorable (they should have done something like that in one of their movies).
Other thing that I liked was the doubts of Linda because she was right, they barely know each other. That was a good point.
I loved 'second' proposal because the story really needed it.
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Date: 2010-01-10 06:23 pm (UTC)You know what I enjoy most of your fics? The dialogues. They seem so natural and fluid, so in canon that they actually could have been part of the movie, in fact, this could have been a perfect ending for 'Shall We Dance?' The movie ending is too abrupt.
Peter pointed to the side. "Look! It's Penny Carroll and Lucky Garnett!"
That made me laugh, haha.
Aw, and the dance under the rain was adorable (they should have done something like that in one of their movies).
Other thing that I liked was the doubts of Linda because she was right, they barely know each other. That was a good point.
I loved 'second' proposal because the story really needed it.
Thanks for this lovely fic, icepixie. :)