Storyline/characterization is what I want--I'm worried it's gone past "dorky charm" and into "everyone looks really foolish, actually." Grammatical stuff I can get on my own.
I'm going to be offline from Saturday morning until Monday evening while I move, and to be honest, there's a possibility I might not even finish my own edit until Monday because I still have all this packing to do. Getting it back sometime next week would not be a problem.
Could you PM me your e-mail address so that I can send the document when I finish it (or covert it to a Googledoc if that would be better for you)?
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Date: 2010-07-22 07:31 pm (UTC)Storyline/characterization is what I want--I'm worried it's gone past "dorky charm" and into "everyone looks really foolish, actually." Grammatical stuff I can get on my own.
I'm going to be offline from Saturday morning until Monday evening while I move, and to be honest, there's a possibility I might not even finish my own edit until Monday because I still have all this packing to do. Getting it back sometime next week would not be a problem.
Could you PM me your e-mail address so that I can send the document when I finish it (or covert it to a Googledoc if that would be better for you)?