AUGH, sorry for the delay in finally commenting on this. I love the final version, especially of Delenn's waking and hearing her captors. The Teep conversation came out very, very well in the rewriting, too.
You've already heard all my fussing about this, but I love it so much! ♥ I'm so glad you wrote it.
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Date: 2010-09-16 04:39 am (UTC)You've already heard all my fussing about this, but I love it so much! ♥ I'm so glad you wrote it.