Line reactions rather than a coherent comment, I'm afraid, but I didn't want to miss leaving you some kind of comment!
overcompensating for the recoil from a rifle - I love this image and this worry.
"What we always do," she said, dropping her napkin on the table. "Interfere." - YES. Awesome.
She would eventually get used to this new freedom they had with each others' bodies, she supposed, but right now it made her shiver delightedly. - This is lovely.
The rising sun painted the planes and curves of her body a yellowy gold - That's a beautiful image. :)
Every time he thought he knew her, she managed to surprise him. - Love that she's a hockey fan.
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Date: 2011-11-04 06:15 am (UTC)overcompensating for the recoil from a rifle - I love this image and this worry.
"What we always do," she said, dropping her napkin on the table. "Interfere." - YES. Awesome.
She would eventually get used to this new freedom they had with each others' bodies, she supposed, but right now it made her shiver delightedly. - This is lovely.
The rising sun painted the planes and curves of her body a yellowy gold - That's a beautiful image. :)
Every time he thought he knew her, she managed to surprise him. - Love that she's a hockey fan.