I really enjoyed this. It worked so well. You did a beautiful job of highlighting how wonderfully competent Olivia is. I wouldn't have thought the 'be calm' refrain would have gone so well with all the action, but it really worked to illustrate how she is collected enough to act decisively, rather than passive. I love Olivia to bits and I love this for reminding me of one of the chief reasons why.
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Date: 2012-01-29 11:43 pm (UTC)